"Love Campus" (1)

The original poster: moonlight Views: 293 Replies: 26 Posted in: 2012-02-01 23:07:19
Ring, ring, ring... get out of class is over, and the campus suddenly turns into a market.
Class 1, Grade 1, Grade 3: Su Yiming (the hero's good friend): "Yixiang, where are you going to play after school?"
"What do you think? I didn't know you, I want to go home and wipe copies after school." Yixiang said. Su Yiming: "Forget it if you don't go, then I'll leave first after school."
Yixiang: "Oh! I got it."
Ling-ling-ling...class has started again, the students stopped talking and went back to class, tick-tock-tock...
Time passed by, ringing, ringing...school is finally over, Su Yiming ran away at the speed of Liu Xiang, the classmates were almost gone, Yixiang also slowly walked out of the classroom, and suddenly he just walked out of the classroom at the same time Someone also passed by on the left, so the two of them bumped into each other. Yixiang shouted loudly: "You don't have eyes when you walk! You're trying to trick me."
Girl: "Sorry, I... didn't mean to do it. How about you!" Yixiang looked at it carefully, (thinking: "Wow! She's so cute! Why haven't I seen her? I really regretted scolding her so loudly just now.") Yixiang: "I...it's okay. How about you? I'll help you. Get up!" Girl (face slightly red): "No, I'm fine... It hurts..." Yixiang (face flushed): "Come on, let me help you." Girl (shy): "Thank you, my name is Xiao Ruxue, I knocked you down, I'm sorry!" Yixiang: "It's okay. I feel uncomfortable."
Xiao Ruxue: "No, I can go home by myself, my home is not far away, thank you for your kindness."
Yixiang: "I'm still worried, let me send you off!"
Xiao Ruxue: "No, I'm not a child, okay! I'll go, bye..." Looking at her leaving figure, Yixiang felt very sad, like a couple who had just broken up... Yixiang returned home. …………(To be continued)
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Girl (face slightly red): 'No need, I'm fine... ah! It hurts so much...'
Go to the Literature Tieba
Uh......
The main gate is too evil
This is only the opening segment, and there is more...
Change it a bit; the word '明' should leave some suspense.
Actually, I already said it very tactfully..
I haven't finished writing yet………
You need to learn how to mute, have you watched 'The Professor'?
I wrote it by hand, so if it's not good, please point it out.
Use a phone, not your hand
Yi Xiang, Pure Love Story - The Male Lead of Azure Memories
Let's use some Japanese, for example a sentence: He stared intently, thinking, ‘Wow! So cute! Why haven't I seen her before?' You could replace it with: He stared intently, thinking, ‘Wow! Kawaii! Why haven't I seen her before?' The girl (her face slightly red) said, 'No, I'm fine… Yaa! That hurts…' could be replaced with: The girl (her face slightly red) said, 'Yamade, yamade… Yaa! That hurts…' And then there's this sentence.
Well, I will remember what everyone said. Look forward to my next one!
Keep the name a mystery; you don't tell people your name the first time you meet them.
Actually, this is also my first time writing a novel. Influenced by Brother Cun, I have a whole lot of inspiration.
Indicates a lack of interest in this type of subject!
Pee before writing again…
The beginning reminded me of when I used to write essays, 'Ring ring ring... the class bell rang...'
Da Men is experienced! This time it needs to be written a bit cooler!
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