Chapter 10 Five-flower tied up (1)
The idiot came to delete the post, but there were replies that could not be deleted! But I'm more ruthless and clear the content of the post directly!
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I want one, a Xiu Feng Emperor in his sixties or seventies. Is it the Xiu Feng Emperor? Four-star, stronger than Ye Yun, haha! It's called Wu Ling.
If you are willing to add one of my characters: him, named Yu Zizhong. He is one of the very few 'Dark Mages' who always carry an aura of mystery. The so-called 'Dark Mages' exist between various mage professions and cultivators. Normally, a mage can only master a specific type of spell after swearing to cultivate the corresponding attribute, but 'Dark Mages' are special. By drinking 'demon's blood', they gain the ability to perceive everything as demons do. As long as they are talented, they can skillfully combine different spells for their own use, and they can also learn cultivators' protective and strengthening techniques and so on. However, this violates natural laws, so they must pay a price—the demon's blood is incompatible with human bodies. Their lifespan is drastically shortened, and their constitution becomes fragile due to the conflicting attributes... They have eyes that show a reddish glow, and because of the demonic factor, they find it difficult to sleep at night. Moreover, they must be bound by a ring which cannot be removed. It continuously corrodes the user's mind and requires a core essence to stabilize; otherwise, they lose consciousness and become a bloodthirsty 'demon'. To remove the ring, one must obtain the essence core of top-level divine beasts. For example, with dragons, one must collect three cores (including killing an actual demon), place the three cores at the top of the 'Demon Fountain', and then immerse the hand in the blood to remove the ring. He is such a 'Dark Mage'. However, he has turned the ring into a weapon. Unlike other 'Dark Mages', he possesses a secret technique—through the ring, he can release very...
Continuation: (Sorry, to explain clearly, I need to go into more detail. Of course, what I say is only for your reference.) With many black lines, one can defend oneself comprehensively and also move agilely to take opponents by surprise, hunting them from all directions, just as if there were many highly venomous snakes lying around you, and you never know when you might get bitten. Of course, at first, he wouldn't let you know his method of attack. If he really wanted to kill you, before you even react, your throat would have already been cut by the thin threads. (This concept of mine is merely bringing out a character from a previous novel of mine, which is now lost. If you think he's useful for your novel, feel free to use him. According to my setup, he would have conflicts with your protagonist. If you decide to adopt him, whether he is good or bad is up to you.)
Well… this differs somewhat from the character definition I originally had in mind. I intended for him to possibly have a misunderstanding with the protagonist, with the protagonist thinking he is hostile toward them. This is because he mysteriously appears after the protagonist finally defeats a powerful spirit beast and takes the spirit core, which causes the protagonist to harbor hatred toward him. In fact, he is acting on the orders of an evil figure (the final Boss? There should be such a character, right?), simply because that person can help him break the restrictions of a ring (Yu Zizhong doesn't know how to remove the constraints, and in fact, it was that person who had him drink the "demonic blood"). At the same time, he also needs to leverage that person's power to find his "younger brother" who was separated during the 'continental war' (this concept is useful in many novels; the author might consider introducing it). Because his younger brother was very weak as a child and cannot manage without his protection, without helping him, he finds it difficult to succeed himself. For this reason, he faithfully follows that person's arrangements and has never questioned them, even if it involves killing. He knows well that being a 'dark mage' makes people see him as not a good person, as a perverted abnormality. Their bloodline is considered dirty and impure. Of course, a big reason for this perception is their great ability to kill… The reason he interacts with the protagonist is that this evil figure ordered him to kill the protagonist, a seemingly weak and insignificant person who would probably never pose a threat to his ambitions. So he is slightly interested in this person and doesn't intend to kill him immediately. However, that person has no patience; upon realizing he is reluctant to act, that person continues to pressure him and dispatches someone else…
Ranger little brother, 'So he is somewhat interested in this person and does not plan to kill him so quickly. However, that person has no patience, and upon realizing that he is not taking action quickly, that person continuously pressures him while also sending someone else...' What does it mean?
He had no way of finding an opportunity to deal with the protagonist. He couldn't give up on his own pursued desires just for interest, or even for things he sometimes did secretly to help him improve. But after long observation, he found that the protagonist's personality brought a somewhat familiar feeling to his numb heart, and he actually couldn't bring himself to act... However, other assassins had also found the protagonist... (This is just my personal opinion, for the original poster's reference only. I am only offering my own interpretation of the characters provided. If the original poster thinks it doesn't match their novel, it can be ignored, and they can continue writing according to their own established plan. If the original poster is interested in my thoughts, I am willing to act as a 'political commissar' for the novel, providing some creativity and suggestions. If there are any questions, please message me privately.)
Um… I need to make it clear… so as not to embarrass myself. That thing about the word count limit wasn't completed.
Under meaningless declarations, calling me a ranger is fine, but adding 'little brother' feels weird.
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