Chapter 29 The Evil Test
The idiot came to delete the post, but there were replies that could not be deleted! But I'm more ruthless and clear the content of the post directly!
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Ahem, coming back to check, waiting for Yu Zizhong to appear… (It's almost chapter 30, right? I still haven't seen the clue that he is about to appear… um… maybe I haven't been online for a while, have my appreciation skills weakened?) Also, as a senior in writing, I still want to give you a tip. The content description is mostly fine, but it's still not detailed enough. You need to evoke imagery to make the novel more engaging. Another point is that the chapters of the novel are divided too finely, and the titles and content are separated, which makes it seem like they're not closely related. Either use a chapter title along with a chapter indicator, for example: “Chapter 30 - The Mysterious Horror Appears,” followed by “The Mysterious Horror Appears (Part 2)” or just change to a subtitle like: “Slaughter,” but the content still belongs to chapter 30. After finishing, at the end of the previous post, you can preview “Chapter 30 completed” and then in the next post title indicate “Chapter 31…” This way, it might avoid confusing readers and help them focus more on your novel because they have to connect the content. Keep it up! I'll be able to check your novel again whenever I can borrow a phone.
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