The Critical One Awakens on Thirteen Nights (1)

The original poster: BLOOD Views: 137 Replies: 9 Posted in: 2012-06-28 08:15:49
The rain pattered against the window, red clouds pushed in from the east, and the sky turned dark in a few minutes. With a violent sound, the rain fell wildly towards the earth. The raindrops were densely packed in the air, smashing each other into pieces, and falling to the ground as water droplets. The candlelight flickered in the house, and Aspasia's red wine was rich and sweet. The door to the house was open, and the cold wind was carrying raindrops, which was biting. A low trumpet sounded outside, and two white rays of light emerged from the rain curtain. It was a pure black sports car that looked like it was from a BMW. The boy walked slowly in the rain and was greeted by a big black umbrella. Without even looking at it, the boy pushed open the umbrella, walked to the car in the rain, opened the door and got in. "Are your clothes wet? Yuyi changes into some clothes." Shijie turned around and put away the umbrella, got into the car and sat on the driver's seat. "No need." "Start it, world." Feather said beside him. "Oh" the world slides the key into the keyhole. A cold blue light flashed on the dashboard, and the wipers swung back and forth, scraping away layers of rain on the glass. The world doesn't look sad at all, shifting gears quickly and refueling. The BMW suddenly accelerated, throwing out a huge arc in the rainy night, cutting through the rain curtain with a sharp blade, and drove straight forward. The radio in the car announced the situation: "Now the report comes from the words of the emperor. A low voice came: The disaster hit us yesterday, but we are extremely desperate. After the committee's consideration, we will abandon Kyoto. The above is..." The voice gradually became smaller, and the ears were ringing and no sound could be heard. In the rain, the rain flowers bloom and the dew is pure. The cherry blossoms were in chaos, and black shadows in the rain came from behind with a sad cry. The speed of the car drew a bright arc. There was a loud bang, a huge lightning flashed past, dark feathers scattered by the window, and a brilliant white tail appeared in the sky. She's all charming and murderous. After spending her whole life, she came to Kyoto's great monster "Hagoromo Fox" and drifted here. Fei Yi jumped down from the car, raised the knife forward, and the tip of the knife was bathed in the rain. The charming sound of death passed by my ears, "Hee hee..." The black shadows swirled around the wings from both ends. On a rainy night, water drops fall to the ground. The sky is obscured by an invisible curtain. quiet. The next moment, the tip of the knife cut through the rain, splashed with blood, and flashed past, and the black shadow turned into dust and faded away. The water drops fell, sliding forward "Astronomical - Assimilation", the ghosts followed the black shadows, and the miserable screams of killing with swords sounded. The blood dyed the rainy night red, and they woke up and climbed up from the ground again. The black sky was broken by the roar of airplanes. During the heavy rain, two knives were thrown from the plane. The water splashed and a black shadow jumped down from the sky. Principal R, an eagle-like man. "The rescue is coming!" The young people have been waiting for a long time! "He said this. pS: The protagonist is about to show off his power. The double swords are activated! Please give me flowers!
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There is too much description of the scenery. The beginning doesn't need so much; it feels like it's all description, which is a bit uncomfortable to read.
This is the legendary way of setting the mood. If you don't understand what's on the second floor, don't casually comment....
Despise the downstairs~
If you change your username downstairs, I won't recognize you.
Same as the 4th floor, downstairs for the written test...
Exposed shrimp is a sudden jade wall
Not bad, not bad.
I want flowers!!
Sending flowers!!
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