Essence Demon Sword King Chapter 1: Traveling to the future
In the silent night. A fat figure waved his braid vigorously, and the one who was beaten was a young man. There were blood marks on the young man's body.
"Dad! Stop beating him." At this time, a woman's heartbreaking words made the braided beater even more angry, and he increased his intensity again.
Women are in more pain. At this time, the woman picked up a sword and put it on her neck. Her eyes were filled with tears and her voice was trembling as she said, "Dad! If you... beat him again... I will die in front of you!
" The braided beater snorted coldly, smiled and said, "You haven't woken up after all these years. Ah, I'm not your father. Your father was my rival in that theft. Haha, your father is also true. If you have to go against me, I will... kill him. Your mother is looking for your father, and I kill her again! "
At this time, the sword in the woman's hand fell, her eyes full of despair. At this time, the boy who was beaten woke up, saw the woman's expression, and said: "Ling'er! What happened to you?" Then he glared at the braided beater and roared: "What did you do to her!"
\"Hahahahahahaha, what's the matter? She knew that both her parents were her enemies." At this time, the braided beater's eyes were filled with murderous intent and he said to the woman: "I want your man to die too, haha!" At this time, flames slowly appeared in the braided beater's hand, and he fired it at the young man.
At this time, the woman rushed in front of the young man, and the flames hit her hard. The woman struggled to say: "Feng, see you in the next life..." At this time, the woman fell heavily to the ground, "How could this happen!" The young man shouted desperately.
The braided beater hit the boy again and said with a smile: "You should go and accompany her too!" The braided beater hit the boy hard again, and the boy was hit with heavy braids. The boy didn't even move. The braided beater said: "I ask you to endure it!" Again like the boy's beating
At this time, something strange happened. The blood marks on the boy's body were healing little by little. The boy's eyes turned red, his hair became long, and his body was covered with scales. At this time, the braid-beater panicked: "What kind of monster are you! Come here." After hearing the master's order, hundreds of soldiers appeared. Field
"Give it to me." The soldier took the weapon to attack the boy, "Ah!" A barrier appeared around the boy, and the approaching soldiers were bounced away. The braided beater said: "You are a waste of money."
The braided beater used his power again. The chain broke, and the flames of the braided beater hit the young man. The young man jumped up, jumped high, and dodged. The young man picked up the woman and shouted: "Elemental Sword". At this time, a glowing sword flew over. The young man immediately hugged the woman and got on the sword. At this time, the sword flew out quickly.
"Ah, sword control!" The braided beater smiled: "I'll let you go today. Once the blood sword comes out, the whole world will be mine!" The braided beater said to everyone: "Find a few people with strong skills for the blood sword to devour!" At this time, people said: "Yes.
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"" The young man escaped and landed on a grassy field. The young man hugged the woman: "Why are you so stupid!" The young man cried in pain. The young man was full of anger: "I want to avenge you!" At this time, a man's laughter came, and the young man was surprised: "Who is it?" Then the man appeared and said: "I entered your body just now to help you." The young man said: "My body was suddenly full of power just now. It was you who helped you." Mine?"
At this time, the man smiled and said: "I didn't expect that you can bear my magic energy. Ordinary people will be swallowed by my magic energy. It seems that you are a foreign body like me!" The young man said: "What a foreign body? It is the basis for cultivating the Demon Saint, and alien bodies are very rare." The man smiled and said, "Do you want to practice the Demonic Way with me?" Then the young man looked at the dead woman and said, "I have lost my beloved, what's the point of practicing?" The man smiled. He said: "Actually, she can still live. Unless you cultivate into a demon, you have the ability to resurrect her." The young man said excitedly: "Really? It's comparable to resurrecting Ling'er!" The man said: Cultivating a demon is not that simple. If you think about it, you will encounter many difficulties once you step in!"
For Ling'er, no matter what difficulties there are, I will not retreat." "Okay!" The man touched the boy's forehead with his hand. At this time, a pattern appeared on the boy's forehead. "This is the sign of the devil. From now on, you will be the devil!" The man gave the boy a necklace, " This is the Demonic Cultivation Chain. This necklace has magic power and a huge space. It can hold any item. Just put her into the necklace. That necklace can protect her soul. The Blood Lord is very cruel. This soul-prisoning palm prevents her soul from being reincarnated."
There was anger in the young man's eyes. Huo: "Xuejun, I will make you pay the price!" At this time, the young man put the woman into the necklace, put the necklace on his neck, and said to the man: "Thank you." Then the man said: "Come with me to practice in the future!" The young man said: "The future?" The man said: "Well, here All the magic energy has been swallowed up! Go to the future to find magic energy." The young man asked, "Well, I don't know your name yet. My name is Qin Feng." The man said with a smile, "It's getting late, let's go!" "Come with me!"
Qin Feng followed Gao Lou to a tall building on the edge of a cliff and said, "Just jump off from here." At this moment, the tall building jumped down, and Qin Feng also jumped down with the tall building...
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Breaking it into sections won't hold things up...
Next time divide
It's pretty good for someone writing a novel for the first time.
I feel that Blood Lord is so weak... doesn't feel like a boss at all!
Tch, he's just a mini-boss, helping the big boss forge swords.
A newbie. I recommend participating in the activity! Give some encouragement.
A good article does not need to be divided into paragraphs.
I hope everyone can give more suggestions.
A newcomer, not bad! Thumbs up! The plot structure is not bad, better than the usual time-travel stories! Great! (Personal suggestion: divide it into sections, which helps readers follow along.)
Throw flowers~~
It's normal for newcomers not to use paragraphs. I was the same back in the day... Feels much better than other time-travel stories. Hope you keep updating, looking forward to your upcoming content.
Yes, you are the motivation for my writing.
hehe. . . .
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Do not let declarative sentences describing the background and interruptions by rhetorical questions push the reader into a drowsy state; this is advice given to you by your elders... remember... remember... remember...
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