Essence Chapter 1 of "Divine Rebellion" A small mountainside village
In a quiet mountain village, this is where our story begins. "Dad! I went out to chop wood." A young man's voice sounded. "Leiyun, be careful, don't fight with those kids, be careful of the monsters!" an old voice responded. Lei Yun nodded and walked out of the room. This is a thatched hut, where Lei Yun and his son live. "Leiyun, are you cutting firewood again?" said a man about forty or fifty years old on the side of the road. "Yes, Uncle Chen." The middle-aged man is Uncle Chen, the person Lei Yun is closest to except his father. Because Lei Yun lost his mother when he was young, Lei Yun was often scolded by those children as "a motherless boy" and "Your mother dumped your father! You gave birth to such a bastard!" Lei Yun ignored them because he knew that beating them was useless. As usual, Lei Yun was insulted by the children again. It was not that Lei Yun had not taught them a lesson, but because if he beat them and made them cry, they would go to their parents again, and then to Lei Yun's father, Lei Xiu. Therefore, it was useless to teach them a lesson, but the scolding became even more vicious! Lei Yun walked over again as if he didn't see anything. Lei Yun walked up the mountain and began a day of logging work. Sometimes if you are lucky, you may pick up some monster corpses, and the gold coins you sell can be worth the firewood that Lei Yun chopped for three days. "Chirp, chirp... chirp." The crisp bird calls sounded in the woods, and the air here was very fresh. Seen from the bottom of the mountain, the mountain is surrounded by these greens. This forest can actually be called a forest. Lei Yun walked slowly into the woods, because if he disturbed some large monsters, he would definitely die! What Lei Yun had to do was to pick up the firewood and put it in the basket behind him, and then go down the mountain to sell it, but he needed to leave some firewood for cooking. In the blink of an eye, it was already evening, and the backpack behind Lei Yun was already full, and he was carrying the small beast he had picked up by the way. "Okay, get ready to go home." Lei Yun stepped forward and prepared to walk down the mountain. "Ouch..." a voice suddenly sounded in front of Lei Yun, "Damn it, I encountered a monster, it's still a big guy!" Lei Yun cursed in his heart. At the same time...in a hot space filled with magma, a man wearing full-body armor was running at extremely fast speeds. But a closer look revealed that this man was actually Lei Yun's father, Lei Xiu! "Damn it, is it too late?" Lei Xiu thought to himself. Lei Xiushi moved forward at full speed. It was already night here in Leiyun, and he was still in a stalemate with this monster. Lei Yun saw this monster in the jungle. It was red all over and looked like a monster with abnormal defense. Lei Yun also knew that he could not confront it head-on, so he had to sneak back to the village. Lei Yun walked quietly through the trees and prepared to go down the mountain.
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(input=25) Alright! I'm here again asking for a divine character! (/input)
Not well written, a beginner on the road
(input=233) Competing with a certain kamitsuki… encouragement, encouragement, I don't know, it's written quite well, keep up the good work! (/input)
Haha, not bad. You can leave a line or two between paragraphs with more words, so the overall layout won't feel too dense. It feels more comfortable and enjoyable to read. Keep it up~
Seeing the title, I felt as if I saw 'Renegade Immortal'...
Reverse of gods... Reverse of immortals
Thought of a miracle
It has to be 1,000 words.
Oh… I'll change it right away
This should be the phone code, it cannot be divided into segments.
The first chapter by the newbie has been featured!
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