Alone on a cold autumn night, I raise my cup to my heart-wrenching sorrow.\Alone I meet the Mid-Autumn moon, drinking tea as the sky does not allow.\The water is cold and people are lonely, when will the heart's moon be full?\By myself in a foreign land, thinking of home and loved ones, growing thin with longing.\Uh. Missing a line to transition...\Together in warm spring days, we drink to the joy of reunion.
Combined it a bit, just missing a little...\
Thanks again to the friends who participated in the poetry activity yesterday
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Uh, even if it's good, I don't like it. Look at the last word of each sentence: the first line is still 'oU', the second line is 'an'. In Chinese class, I find poems like this the most annoying, hard to memorize,,,,,,,
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