Essence [Original] Phantom Part I – Supreme of the Six Kingdoms (Chapter One)
Preface: Phew, finally finished the conception of the first chapter. The main character will appear in the third chapter. Recruiting 4 main characters across the internet! It gets more exciting as it goes on! ---------------------------------------- "R-Report, it's not good! Your Majesty! The Perfect Family has broken in!!" A guard ran into the palace in a panic, nearly falling... "So soon." Huangfu sat on the throne, a flicker of unease crossing his handsome face, but he quickly regained his composure. "Go block them," he commanded the guard, who knelt on the ground and said, "I'm sorry, Your Majesty. We... have no chance of winning. I will take my leave first!" The guard then drew his sword and slit his own throat... Huangfu knew that the only people he could rely on now were the two imperial guards beside him. The guard on the left said, "Your Majesty, what should we do now?" "Fight our way out!" Huangfu drew his sword, thinking, "To think that my Huangfu Chao Yun, wise and magnificent, who has ruled the Dalin Kingdom for hundreds of years, would be ruined by someone I was too lazy to even kill back then." Just as he was lost in thought, there was a rumble, and three men in black leapt down from the palace roof. On their arms were carved the same two characters – 'Perfect'! Coming this fast? "Attack!" Huangfu shouted, and the two imperial guards charged at the three men in black. In less than two seconds, the guards suddenly stopped halfway. Huangfu seemed to hear the sound of blood flowing, and in an instant, the two guards gushed blood like fountains, then collapsed to the ground... ---------------------------------------- Chapter One [End] P.S.: The first chapter is the least exciting; it only gets more exciting from here!
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I want a villain character…
Too little, it would be better if there was more!
Hehe, please write the name you have in the book
As expected... Huangfu is the most fragile person in type 7723 novels... and——the ranger... is the profession with the worst popularity in type 7723 novels... As the first 7723 ranger, I feel really frustrated...
Also… Feixue's 'goods don't match the description'… By the way, the target of double (bi~) the word count, did you set it too high for yourself… Should we lower it? →_→
Xiao Ji looked at my luminous music box Chapter One, with less than 200 words...
Charlatan!
Speechless, how come the protagonist is Huangfu. And it's so short.
Huangfu is not the main character..
What kind of novel? Fantasy?
The original poster should prepare to write a conquest-themed novel.
I'm a newbie, keep it up. By the way, brothers, I am now participating in the literary club at school to provide articles, and I also do text editing for websites.
=_= Twelfth floor. Not bad. On that website.
Indicates that typing is stressful…
^_^
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