"Wedding Dress" - Chapter Twelve - Do You Want Me to Give You an Egg?

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"An, who are you waiting for?" Ye asked. \"You!\" An replied. \"What, stop joking! I'm only one star, are you serious?" Ye laughed. \"I'm sure I'm not mistaken. You're the person I've been waiting for. The moment the jade pendant absorbed your blood, I knew the person I was waiting for had finally arrived. Don't mind that you're only one star now, you have a hidden attribute. After all, people with hidden attributes are rare these days. No one can predict your future. I predict that in at most 10 years you could lift my seal," An said. \"What seal?" Ye asked. \"Don't you find it strange? Why haven't I gone out?" An countered. \"Yeah! You're a God-Demon Master, but you haven't gone out. That's strange," Ye said. \"You…you…I give up, I could go out, I would have gone out long ago!" An's face turned red with anger. \"Oh~~ that's true, why didn't I think of that," Ye replied. \"So how should I deal with you?" Ye asked. \"I'll tell you when your strength is enough," An replied. \"Then why are you waiting for me?" Ye asked. \"That mysterious voice told me to give you a few things and then guide your training," An said. \"Where do I train?" Ye asked. \"Right here," An replied. \"But you haven't told me where this is," Ye asked. \"This is the Tower of Darkness in the Eight Elements Tower," An replied. \"Eight Elements Tower?" Ye asked puzzled. \"The Eight Elements Towers are the Fire Tower, Water Tower, Earth Tower, Wind Tower, Light Tower, Darkness Tower, Space Tower, and Spirit Tower. The elements inside are ten times those of the outside world!" An said. \"Then what are you going to give me?" \"Do you want an egg?" An said, somehow producing an egg. \"What egg?" Ye asked. \"A magic beast egg," An replied. \"What's it for?" Ye asked. \"To be your contracted magic beast," An replied. \"But…brother, that's an egg, right?" Ye said. \"The egg will hatch into a magic beast. If it hatches using your body, the effect will be better!" An said mischievously. \"I'm not a hen," Ye said. \An made the egg about the size of a chicken egg and merged it into Ye's forehead. \"Ah!!!!!! The egg…went…in…" Ye screamed."Don't worry, you won't die. I still have to wait for you to come out! I won't let you die," said An. "The spiritual contract governs all other contracts."

"When will this egg be ready?" Ye asked.

"In three years," An replied.

"Is there anything else besides the egg?" Ye asked.

"Yes, but I can't give it to you now!" An said. "By the way, you should go back. Remember to hang the jade pendant around your neck. This jade pendant is the key for you to come here. As long as you hold the pendant and say, 'An, I'm here,' you can come here anytime. Remember, do not tell anyone about me."



Ye returned to the dormitory.

"Goodbye! Qian!"

"Goodbye! Xiaoyu."

A young girl was seen coming out of the dormitory.



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PS: The second female lead has made her appearance!
PS2: Xiaoxuan will appear later!
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→_→ It's time to hatch the eggs tonight~
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→_→ (A few people with almost the same name were wandering around, and if you didn't know, you'd think you were seeing a ghost. 'Xiaoxuan?' 'What are you looking at? I'm not Xiaoxuan, I'm Xiaoxuan!' '......' As for the eggs and stuff, if you get them in, how will they come out after hatching? It seems another senseless tragedy is about to happen... )
I really am not trying to discourage the original poster. I suggest you read what you've written yourself to see… All I read was: 'He asked. He said. He asked. He was puzzled. He…' You see, it's all dialogue and various forms of 'said.' I'm not trying to attack you, but a novel like this is hard to read. I suggest you slow down your update pace and put more effort into your writing style. What about the second year of middle school? You can write well in the second year too! So far, all the feedback you've received has been positive, which is why your progress hasn't been obvious. Actually, you're very lucky to have so many friends reviewing your book. Today I'm going to break the harmony and be the bad guy! Keep working hard. If you write novels well, your Chinese language grades will also improve.
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