"A Pain"
At night, the moonlight is hazy, my thoughts awaken with the shooting stars, the pain tears my tentacles, and I feel lonely. I fall into my arms at night and taste a wine called lovesickness. Bitterness slides across the tip of my heart. Warmth is like the burning pain of a wound. Moonlight, can you give me your gentlest song? Gather the dreams of longing and embroider them into a pillow. In this way, I can: lie down with my thoughts on my pillow, lie down with my thoughts in my arms, and laugh through every night. . .
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If it's about drinking alcohol, then it's not 'hot'! The passionate emotional connotation doesn't fit; if it's very strong, then it's 'spicy'.
Thanks for the suggestion from the first floor, hehe...
Amidst simplicity, there is deep affection hidden; this wine adds just the right warmth to pain. It is the essence of the short poem.
Ah, this poem is indeed very simple.
So talented, awesome! Even surpassing Mao Zedong!
Written very well
Reply to the ninth floor: I didn't write it myself, I just shared it because I thought it was well-written and matched my mood.
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