Chapter 1 First Line
"Ah~ the air here is so good~ Fireball Rat, come out~" Before I could get rid of my excitement, I hurriedly ran to the grass and released the Fireball Rat.
"hino~" The fireball rat came out of the Pokmon ball, spinning in place, scratching it with its little feet... I didn't expect that the fireball rat could be as cute as a chrysanthemum leaf~
I sat under the tree. Watching it do all this makes me feel peaceful and beautiful. I finally have the Pokémon I have always dreamed of.
The dark green blooming in the memory is about him.
He is Xiaosheng.
He is the younger brother of Xiaoyao, the goddess of Fengyuan. He has dark green hair that sways like memory and is rich in knowledge.
That can be considered a secret love.
So, I decided that I must go to Fengyuan. I want to see what he looks like now, whether he is beautiful or handsome.
"hi ~no~" Fireball Rat acted coquettishly at me.
"hinono~hi no?" It jumped onto my shoulder and leaned against me.
"Fireball Rat, I feel so lucky. Although I don't have the chrysanthemum leaves in my dreams, I have such a gentle partner like you. We will take care of each other in the future. In fact, I didn't think about anything. I just thought about where I should go first." I stroked the soft fur of Fireball Rat and said softly.
"Hi no!" Fireball Rat nodded in agreement.
"Hino~" Fireball Mouse pointed at the honey behind him and jumped up to lick it.
"Honey... what?! Honey?! Come back soon!" As far as I know, where there is honey... there are giant needle bees...
"bi bi!" "bi bi bi!" Before I had time to take away the fireball rats, a group of giant needle bees rushed out...
The fireball rats didn't have time to leave, and were attacked by the giant needle bees with their needles.
"Fireball Rat~" I have run away.
I don't know how long it took, but the giant needle bee left.
"Fireball rat..." I walked back and saw it lying on the ground covered in bruises and barking softly.
I saw it crying.
"Fireball Rat..."
Suddenly a large group of giant needle wasps appeared around me, and I instinctively backed away. However, for the sake of the Fireball Rat, I absolutely cannot retreat!
"What do you want to do! Isn't this enough? What do you want!" I shouted at them.
The Fireball Rat looked at me.
I picked it up and rushed out of the swarm.
A swarm of bees pursues her behind her.
"Fireball Rat, I will absolutely, absolutely never leave you again."
"hino? Hi...no." Fireball Rat was pleased.
"bi bi bi!!!" The giant needle bees sped up.
I know I can't hide.
I could only hold it in my arms and block the attack with my body.
"hino?" Fireball Rat looked at my painful expression.
I just feel a burst of heat.
The swarm dispersed.
I looked at the Fireball Rat, it just used flames.
I'm very tired, but Fireball Rat is even more tired. So I immediately got up and ran towards the hospital with the Fireball Rat. My body couldn't withstand so many attacks, and waves of severe pain tore through my body.
Essence 〈ポケモンゲットだぜ〉!
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The upper part of this post is written quite well, smooth and full. However, there are two key points that are not highlighted. The lower part is not written very well. It's sloppy and a bit watered down, especially there is a big gap that hasn't been filled...
What does JY on the second floor mean =_=
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The same as your JY.
Slowly, I like thinking all day about things that make me laugh. Everyone laughs at me for being too crazy, I laugh because others can't see through... I explode! Plane! Straight! Rob the landlord! Three with one! Double tips! Cap! Big Joker! Small Joker! Haha~
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Well written
I should have known...
→_→ second floor and fourth floor, I wonder if there's a JY in my name…
Can you not say such creepy things in your replies?
→_→ Sixth floor, not giving any face at all…
This is what you call sneaky, it's nothing…
Did Miss SU change careers? \The newbie says all talented people must be supported! \Support! Keep it up!
Hi, keep it up
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