[Short Story]
Autumn is dying, flowers are flying
She sighed stupidly
A female swordsman killed her enemy with a sword, a person who loved her deeply
Ten years ago
"Xiao Lan, my name is Xiao Lan, with a temperament like Lan."
Xiao Lan giggled, looking at her relatives in a pool of blood, absolutely stunned A faint smile appeared on Mei's face. Facing death, she had no fear. "I am your parricide enemy. You don't hate me?" Facing the woman's smile, the man raised his sword. All he wanted to do was to kill her. The last bloodline of the Feng family, Feng Xiaolan
\"Xiaolan, my name is Xiaolan, I have a temperament like Lan."
\Xiaolan is still giggling, maybe, she is a fool
\The man chuckled secretly, with a smile on his face
\He wants to keep her, she is 18 years old but seems to be only 8 years old IQ person
\The man is just an 18-year-old juvenile killer, but unlike her, he was famous all over the world ten years ago
\The name "Condor Xiaochi" can be used to scare the cry of a child
\"Stop crying, if you cry again, the condor is coming.", the child's cry The sound was immediately stopped. His sword, his martial arts, and his murderous nature were famous all over the world ten years ago. No one would understand that he would break his rules for ten years. He left the only survivor since his debut, a woman. He stayed with her and taught her peerless martial arts
Sword Killing
She still smiled stupidly, looking at the sword flower he swung with his sword, waving it in the air
He said something lightly and looked at Lan with a smile
The woman didn't say anything, she just took it. The long sword in Shenying Xiaochi's hand wielded the swordsmanship she had just seen once. He was very surprised. Her talent was amazing. It took her less than 3 months to learn all his martial arts. "You have learned all my martial arts. You can Become a good killer." He smiled sincerely, but looked at her hand holding the sword and fell silent. Those were a pair of angelic and pure hands, but now they were stained with blood. Legend has it that there is a sword technique called "Sword Killing", and those who master it can be invincible, right?
\She asked him softly, her eyes full of expectation
\ He was speechless, he knew that she still hated him and wanted to kill him
\ He didn't want to tell her that in fact, the legend of "Sword Killing" was true, but the person who practiced it only had one year to live
\ He hoped that she would live a long life and use his whole life to protect her
\ In the end, he told her that that was It was a very powerful swordsmanship that he had not practiced, but he had the sword manual for her to practice. She was secretly happy, thinking that she could kill him quickly. He saw the smile on the corner of her mouth, and he knew what the smile meant. But he still gave her his famous skill, and he could never use it to kill people again, because he said that he had never practiced it. "Kill the sword", just don't want her to find out that she is only practicing "Condor 3"
Her talent always makes people very scared
It took him 3 years to practice the sword, but she only took less than 3 months
She told him that she smiled when she had mastered it. There was silent hatred under her beautiful smile. Yes, all these years, besides pretending to be stupid, she only had hatred. She hated him. Although he taught her martial arts and made her "invincible", he was her family-killing enemy. She left him. "I will come and kill you in a year.""
" After she finished speaking, she left without looking back. Looking at her leaving back, Xiao Chi shed tears
" He was about to die
" Because he knew that the highest state of the sword is ruthlessness, and a sentimental swordsman has only one knot. Result——Death
He fell in love with her
Waiting was just a beautiful mistake after all
Lan just left him
But she did not leave the practice of "killing the sword"
When she used her sword to cut off the last When a leaf fell, she thought her swordsmanship had surpassed his. Because he said that his sword could not cut the fallen leaf into two pieces. And she did it. She started to seek revenge from him, but she was defeated by him every time. Under the sword
\She said unwillingly that this was impossible, wasn't "Sword Killer" invincible in the world?
\He just said that his swordsmanship was not very good
\"He couldn't tell her that her swordsmanship was just that he was the "Condor 3 Style", Instead of "killing the sword"
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to
\" Tears left
Every time she was filled with hatred
Yes, there was only hatred in her eyes
But his eyes were full of love and pity
The annual flowers bloomed and fell
Her life-threatening sword became his What she thought about day and night
She wielded hatred with her sword, while he missed her with all his heart
In the end, he fell under her sword
Because he didn't want to see her live unhappy because of hatred
Maybe it was also a relief for him
The result of his waiting was death
Sometimes waiting is a beautiful mistake
He died under her sword, and she also cried
"Why? ? Why did God do this to me? "
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Killing the Sword - Wrong encounter, destined sadness
Replies (36)
Honestly, for example, this sentence 'The man chuckled to himself, a trace of a smile appearing on his face'—don't you think it's contradictory?
People who can't cook aren't allowed to comment on food being bad, right? Besides, I clearly wrote 'some little touches,' meaning the mood was achieved, it's just that the writing can't withstand scrutiny. Do you want every piece to only receive praise and never have any criticism?
Tch. Someone with a problem with their mouth is even qualified to judge how the dish is cooked?!... Uh, sorry, it was my fault to scold you. I'm really sorry, bowing! But you really deserve to be scolded. Sorry again!
You see, even the original poster thinks this article is so-so. Could it be that the next person's taste is the problem? Also, there's no need to apologize to me for insulting, after all, I'm naturally a troll on Tieba and used to being criticized. Although I haven't gotten to use a harsh word on the harmonious 7 forums yet →_→
I've had enough, um!!! Are you f***ing never going to stop!!?!?!?! Would it kill you to say a few less words?!? Even if you think this article is terrible, you shouldn't keep criticizing it over and over, right!? Even if the dish is badly cooked, it's still better than you useless people who can't even cook!!
Calm down, calm down. You have to comment on the dishes when eating, let alone when watching things? He is a very good viewer. That's how Old Qian is.
First, calm down →_→ then criticize multiple times? Did you even seriously read my post →_→ I personally think my evaluation is quite fair. Simply put, the artistic conception is there, but the writing isn't good. Also, I actually *can* write this kind of article →_→ I once wrote a piece which I believe could reach the level of this one. However, talking about it is useless. I'll show it to you when I have time.
Mostly it's written on paper, and then typing it out on the phone takes a lot of time →_→ Another thing is that I feel the writing I do isn't that good… I don't have the face to post it.
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