[Original, Poem] 'Watching the Moon'
The cold wind of loneliness fills the chest with sorrow,\ Snow and rain drift and freeze over the half-moon boat.\ The sound of thunder appears and disappears in the ravine of the sky,\ Ink clouds veil and obscure the moonlit cave's shyness.
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It does not thunder when it snows.
It was thundering. That day on the Spring Festival, at midnight, snow was falling and the thunder was rumbling. Don't you know there was sleet? Snowflakes and snow grains are both snow.
The upper part expresses sorrow, but in the scenes of the lower part, such feelings are no longer apparent...
This poem is the sorrow at the bottom of my heart, it's too sad, so I changed it.
The last sentence,,,,,, so profound
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