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[Original, Poem] 'Lotus Pond' (Seeking guidance from Qian and An'an)

The original poster: quite Views: 242 Replies: 11 Posted in: 2013-03-08 15:32:27
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Obliquely hanging beaded flowers, amidst the graceful purple gauze.\Wind rolls the curtain, falling into the pond, lotus leaves dance lightly.\Willows touch the pond water, hibiscus appears overflowing from the water.\Mandarin ducks play in the water, wings spread, splashing a layer of mist!
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quite 2floor pin to top
A lousy poem, embarrassing myself here, An An, seeking guidance, comments, and revisions.
2013-03-08 15:33:31
easy 3floor
Just passing by... not bad... that's it, no explanation
2013-03-08 15:39:19
Top comment specialist, Zi Xuan 4floor
Passing by... Ding Ding
2013-03-08 15:42:01
quite 5floor
Absolutely original, cannot be found. Recently went to Baidu Tieba and relaxed for a few days.
2013-03-08 15:42:14
Destroy the dry and decay @Meimeijiang 6floor
Pretty good, I won't make any cheap comments, just passing by.
2013-03-08 15:55:46
easy 7floor
I wanted to say a few words of comment, but after thinking about it, I decided not to...
2013-03-08 15:55:59
quite 8floor
What's the matter... Even though this poem is really bad, there's no need to not comment at all... Not giving me any face~
2013-03-08 15:58:15
loser 9floor
I'm just passing by!
2013-03-08 16:28:46
Chen Xiang 10floor
The moonlight over the lotus pond drifts on the water,\The little pig hugs the poster's waist.\The poster lifts a leg,\The little pig arches its waist,\Oh my! Sex!
2013-03-08 16:36:10
Sometimes letting go is a relief 11floor
Not like a poem
2013-03-08 17:04:18
Dawn 12floor
When I imagine a poem as a mood, I find it messy...
2013-03-08 21:27:20
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