(Butterfly Loves Flowers) Lotus Pond
The fluttering of twin wings is light and wonderful.\When the dragonflies fly, they circle the green pond.\They occupy only a corner of the lotus flower, but where in the world is a beautiful figure not found!\Meeting by the painted tower to chat by the stream.\The beauty speaks softly, drawing the laughter of butterflies.\The lady does not hear the fish jumping, yet the affectionate one is spared by the heartless.\———————\Actually, even an amateur can speak, seeking comments and guidance...\Why add 'spring scenery' when writing 'lotus pond'? Without 'emotion' in the poem, how can the words stay in people's hearts?\Imagine the scene in the poem...
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Um, can I comment?
Whatever... nobody cares.
Then my comment is: \Passing by
Just passing by, ..
Although I don't understand what you mean, I still want to support you.
The moonlight over the lotus pond drifts on the water,\The little pig hugs the poster's waist.\The poster lifts a leg,\The little pig arches its waist,\Oh my! Sex!
Heartbroken?
Good poem! Good poem indeed!
The double wings fly lightly and wonderfully. \ When the dragonfly flies, it circles the green pond. \ It only occupies a corner of the lotus flower, yet across the ends of the earth, where is the lovely figure not seen! \ Meeting at the painted tower, chatting by the creek. \ The beauty whispers softly, attracting the laughter of butterflies. \ The lady does not hear the fish jump, yet the passionate are spared by the unfeeling. Medicine, medicine, check it out.
One title, two scenes, should I write about a lotus pond or talk about love!!
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