Essence Original novel 'Death Game'

The original poster: Qiyu @ Softly Chanting Views: 373 Replies: 18 Posted in: 2013-03-10 22:04:30
Chapter 1: The Game You Can't Exit\AD 2033_\Humankind has fully mastered Virtual Reality technology_\Creating what is known as a fully imaginary space_\This technology is widely applied in various fields_\Today, the world's first large-scale VR online game has been successfully developed_\Its name is 'SharweaponWorld'_\Unlike traditional online games, running this game only requires a gaming platform called 'VrCD.' It looks similar to a boxing helmet and serves as the fundamental base for the game. Through numerous signal components embedded inside, it generates multiple electric fields that connect directly to the user's brain. This allows the user to experience vision, smell, hearing, taste, and touch—the five senses—without relying on real-world organs, making it feel as if they are experiencing the 'real world.'_\However, after using this device, the user becomes completely 'isolated' from the real world. All commands from the brain to the body are intercepted and recycled by the 'VrCD,' analyzed, and applied within the game. Simply put, the person's consciousness fully enters the game. This function is designed to allow users to move freely within the game without external interference._\In SharweaponWorld:\Ultrfas Continent. Starting Town. Southwest Prairie\Chris. standing lightly on the grass. The green prairie meets the blue sky in the distance, and the breeze brings bursts of coolness… No matter how many times he experiences the lifelike scenery and tactile sensations, it is hard to believe this is a world within a game._\Chris raised the bow in his hand, aimed at a black boar not far away, and drew the string. The system detected the drawing action, and suddenly an arrow appeared on the previously empty bow. Chris released the string, and the arrow shot toward the boar at incredible speed. The boar's HP bar dropped by nearly three-fifths the moment it was hit._\Chris's attack enraged the boar, which recklessly charged at him. Yet Chris did not prepare to defend or dodge; he moved toward the boar. As they were about to collide, Chris jumped into the air, skillfully avoiding the boar's attack, simultaneously spinning 180 degrees, drawing the bow again, and firing at the boar._\Battle won! Experience gained: 7, Bella 25, Loot: 0._\Chris lay on the soft grass. A breeze blew past, bringing an incredibly comfortable sensation._\For Chris, rather than continuously leveling up in the game, it was better to come here and fully enjoy the comfort that 'nature' provided.Unlike during the closed beta period, he had plenty of time to level up later.
"Help!" Just as Qian was planning to take a short nap, a scream caught his attention. He turned his head toward the source of the sound and saw a player who looked like a young girl, holding a bow, being chased by a wild boar and panicking as she ran toward him.
Qian hadn't even had time to get up and avoid it when she stomped on his groin with her foot, the pain instantly paralyzing his whole body. That wasn't enough—the wild boar chasing the girl also stomped on it... Poor Qian, after experiencing this twice in a row, the pain was beyond words... For the first time, Qian hated the realism of the game.
And for the girls who stomped on him, it was as if nothing had happened; they each ran their own way, chasing their own targets.
"Stupid wild boar, don't underestimate me," the girl said while running and drawing her bow. When the arrow appeared on the bow, she turned and shot at the boar. With a roar, the wild boar was eliminated.
"Huh? Did I just step on something?" The girl looked along the path she had just fled, then saw Qian holding his groin and opening the game menu. She relaxed when she saw he had lowered the pain settings in the system from 30% to 0%.
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Since the technical foundation and conditions are basically the same as the original work, feel free to complain or break eggs!
Due to time constraints, I'm sending these first! I will send the rest in the next couple of days.
The game name is 'Shar weapon World'—I forgot to press the space key.
I'm going to sleep first. If anything comes up, message me privately. I will create my own 'SAO'. You can hit, scold, or smash as you like.
Did the original poster write this? ding
I want the main character; it doesn't matter who the male or female lead is.
Top top is healthier
Replying to Perfect @Xiao Xuan, the main character is Qianle, if you don't mind the female lead...
The content is a bit short, but since it is the first chapter, it is not very complete and lacks something that can catch the reader's attention. The introduction is also not fully developed, but it can be supplemented later. However, if you write it now, readers can easily understand the general background of the novel you want to express, which achieves the purpose of attracting their attention. I hope the author takes this advice and does not criticize this post.
Looks like a young girl on the outside, but actually inside is......
Spoiler alert, no, it's really a woman.
Additionally, one more thing: the author can use their rest time to roughly outline the novel's framework, level settings, character attributes, etc. It's best to write it down. Online games are the most troublesome with all kinds of data...
I've basically thought this through, and I will talk about it slowly from now on.
What? The main character is called Qian
Well, that's fine too. This novel really tests patience, especially since it's about online games. I hope you can stick with it.
Feels like Sword Art Online... no explanation
I was puzzled between 'Bella'… and read it as 'Beli' (the currency used in One Piece)… =_=
Looking forward to the sequel
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