7723 Short Story 'Robbed' Sequel 2

The original poster: Perfect @Lord of Hell@ arrives at the city Views: 170 Replies: 10 Posted in: 2013-03-12 17:15:43
"First, bow to Heaven and Earth"\"Second, bow to the elders"\"Bow to each other as husband and wife"\"Send into the bridal chamber"\As the MC's words fell, the bride was ushered into the room. Of course, the bride did not cooperate; from the wedding ceremony to entering the bridal chamber, she had been forcibly made to comply.\"Second-in-command, congratulations!" the bandits exclaimed in unison.\"Haha, brothers, today is my big day. No one leaves sober today!" the second-in-command laughed loudly.\"Alright, no one leaves sober," replied the chief.\ After a long time, all the bandits were drunk.\"Everyone... brothers... the spring night... is worth a thousand gold, I'm heading back to my room first," the second-in-command staggered drunkenly toward the room.\"Young lady, I... am here," the second-in-command pushed open the door and saw her curled up in the corner of the bed, tears streaming down, displaying fear and helplessness in her eyes. He grinned as he approached the bed.\"No, I beg you, let me go..." She trembled all over, but the second-in-command ignored her and pounced on her, starting to force himself on her. The second-in-command tore her clothes open.\"No, no... please, let me go..." she struggled and cried out, but the second-in-command, driven by lust, ignored her screams and stripped her in a few motions, leaving her with only a dudou. He looked at her full breasts and plump hips, his breathing becoming heavy. One hand groped her two sacred peaks freely, and he reached to rip off her dudou. At that moment, the ceiling suddenly collapsed, and a young man in white descended from above with a paper fan in hand.\"Who are you?" the second-in-command released her and turned to the young man in white.\"Who I am doesn't matter; what matters is that you touched my woman," the young man in white said coldly.\"Kid, dare to disturb my fun, die!" After speaking, the second-in-command threw a punch. The young man in white closed his fan and kicked the second-in-command in the chest. The second-in-command tried to dodge, but his movements were clumsy and he was drunk, so he was hit in the chest, felt a heavy pain, spat out blood, and fainted. Seeing him knocked out, the young man in white walked to the bed.\"Qian, I'm sorry, I came too late."\"Is it... Master Chen?""Shallow heard the words of the young man in white and came to her senses. She looked up at the person in front of her, 'Young Master Chen, I...' After confirming that the person in front of her was indeed Chen Xiang, Qian threw herself into Chen Xiang's arms and cried bitterly. After a while, when she had cried enough, she lifted her head, her eyes swollen and red, looking at Chen Xiang, 'Young Master Chen...' Just as Qian was about to speak, Chen Xiang covered her lips with his hand. Chen Xiang gazed gently into her eyes, 'Don't say anything. I will take you away from here.' After saying this, Chen Xiang grabbed a blanket and draped it over Qian, then picked her up and, with a gentle leap, left the place with her. The night wind blew softly, and the white-clad young man's garments fluttered... (Finished writing. It took me more than three hours to type this little bit on my phone, revising countless times in the process. Everyone, take a look and see how it is)."
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Drifting by...
...Who is the second-in-command?
Drifting past again...
Just passing by~~~
Er Dangjia is perfect @LittleXuan
Not bad, I want to support it, but the plot is too clichéd, the narration basically lacks psychological activity, and the characters don't have any distinctive traits. You could change their names and it would be the same. An ideal novel is one where the characters are deeply memorable and irreplaceable. I myself also can't clearly express the thoughts in my heart, but I support you.
Very good, not bad
Ask 3.
How can Chen have this kind of good image?? It doesn't fit…
This… is it really okay to go around wearing just a bellyband without an outer garment?
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