First Poem:\Sitting alone in the secluded forest\Gazing until the dreams of the mortal world fade\Putting pen to paper with a light sigh\The strings fall, intending to summon peaches\The full moon looks over the secluded forest
Second Poem:\Sitting alone in a small secluded place\Gazing until the dreams of the mortal world fade\Putting pen to paper with a light sigh\The strings fall, intending to forget peaches\The full moon is like a secluded forest
Neither Xian Yue nor I are professionals; if there are parts that are not well written, please point them out to help us correct them. Thank you.
Which poem is better???
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A lifetime, a death, a cycle of reincarnation, \ originally a wanderer in the mortal world. Like fluff, like rain, like flying fragments. \ I ask you, how can you recognize me? \ "Written by myself, please don't criticize"
I don't have much knowledge in my gut, so I can't give advice... Calling out Qian! — A recognized literary youth
There are many kinds of poems, it's just that I don't know which kind of poem Moli Shang thinks is good...
The ancient style is difficult to grasp in terms of artistic conception, and it is often ornate but impractical.
Classical-style poetry values artistic conception; the more pleasant it sounds when read, the less good the poem usually is.
Tch~ Me picking on you? When have I ever not been the one you were mocking! How am I picking on you?
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