[Chapter 1: Visitors from Beyond the Heavens]

The original poster: Holy Spirit@Beiming Views: 179 Replies: 15 Posted in: 2013-10-24 22:31:53
[Please feature this! Absolutely original novel, you definitely won't find this book online, because I love 7723, so I will first post a few chapters here that were originally meant for Qidian.]
In 2078, the ozone layer, which had long been severely damaged by humans, finally disappeared. But as early as the beginning of 2076, humans had already realized this could happen, and it could occur within 2-5 years. Therefore, humans devoted all their talent to developing a drug to resist strong ultraviolet rays. By the beginning of 2077, they had finally developed a perfect version of this drug with no adverse effects. People called it the [Anti-Sun Drug]. Once used, it was effective for life. By the end of 2077, this drug had been made available to all humanity. If a new baby was born, it would not need this drug, because the drug had perfect hereditary effects.
By mid-2078, when the ozone layer had completely disappeared, the intense sunlight did not cause any discomfort to humans, and animals, for unknown reasons, were also not affected by the sunlight. However, while people were still celebrating, disaster struck. Everyone knew that the ozone layer could weaken ultraviolet rays, but no one had expected ultraviolet rays to also serve as a defense against alien creatures. Two months after the ozone layer disappeared, alien invaders sailed their warships to Earth. Under pressure, humanity abandoned their differences and formed the [Galactic Alliance]. From then on, the great war began.
After a long period of battles, humans classified aliens into ranks based on their physical strength, from low to high: 'E, D, C, B, A, S, SS, SSS'. Humans also developed strength-enhancing methods comparable to aliens: [Strengthen physical fitness, unlock physical potential, enhance physical defense. But the main combat weapons remained firearms]. These methods were also classified as: 'E, D, C, B, A, S, SS, SSS'. Weapons were similarly ranked, with power being [high levels dominate lower levels]. That is, an A-level weapon could only break half the defense of an A-level alien but could perfectly break all defenses of any creature below A-level [with a few exceptions, such as super-tank-like aliens].
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Come on, I believe in you
Not good-looking, not interesting, just passing by, you can continue writing...
Bumping the post!
The writing is not mature, but if you write, I will read it. Top top top top
There's too little here to understand the specific plot… hard to comment. (There's too much setting content, which isn't good for the first chapter; change it to a prologue to introduce the background in detail.)
Why does it feel like I'm introducing an online game........
How should I put it, you actually need to write 1,000 characters.
There are too many of these kinds of books, it's hard to write. I recommend you write some classic sequels, for example, 'The Plum in the Golden Vase: My Passionate Stories with the Site Owner,' 'The Plum in the Golden Vase: The Story I Have to Tell with Little Dian,' 'The Plum in the Golden Vase: The Story of Sora Aoi and Li Mochou Competing for the Taoist Priest.' Your topic is just boring. It's nothing more than: humans mess up the Earth, aliens come, seize the Earth, and then start the famous 'Second 1999 War Chronicles.' If you don't know what '1999 War Chronicles' is, please Baidu 'Final Battle 1999' or '1999 War Chronicles.'
Same as the 6th floor. Not recommended..
No, I want to study. I just took a little time to write it.
This is the prologue; I'll write the main text this afternoon. Wait for me, after all, I have to study.
Agree, the idea is good, but later abcd became repetitive again
ABCD I can't think of anything else, after all, it's modern writing!
There are way too few science fiction elements and scientific knowledge.
If you want to write this, I recommend you first read the short science fiction story *The Last Human on Earth*, also translated as *Childhood's End*. *Battle for Terra* was also partially adapted from this. I'll send you the attachment.
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