On the day of February 11, 2013,
I came to Qitan. At that time, I didn't know what a forum was. I can only say that my mobile phone brought me here.
I didn't know how to post at that time, so I followed the chat room the first time I came. It was also in the chat room that I met Sister Zi Xuan and Brother Bad Lang,
\
Later, they helped me a lot, and later I also met the one who is now named Pirate Z, and that one...(forgot), Lone Wolf, Sister Tong...
Later, for some reasons, I quit again,
I thought I really would never come back, but there are too many things to say and I don't know where to talk. My brother and I don't Same, he knows how to play a lot, but I don't. I play all the things my brother has played (it feels like I'm playing with him... it seems like he's just playing with me...),
\I don't know why, but I'm back again, maybe I can't let go, maybe… because there are people I care about here,
originally I thought I would never appear on the forum again and would only play my own game, but I can only say that I am active again...
However, I want to thank you... the one whose name I forgot, and Ah Hui, it was your departure that made me what I am now. Although we just passed each other, after all, you were important in my life...
【Seven Altars of Love】Untitled
Replies (33)
Uh, is sister-in-law here to compete with me for the ink prize...?
Passing by...
Just telling the truth
But, I wrote three hundred more words than you, not afraid anymore~~~
Sorry, Xiao Lian, his sister-in-law, I am late.
。。。
555... Scholar, my sister-in-law and I are fighting over the ink prize~~~~→_→
→_→⊙▽⊙←_←
Changing my name~~~
Damn, Xiao Lian, what are you doing... Random person, fake (ID:43333)
I didn't!!!!
Um, let's just consider this as re-entering, Seven Altar, hi everyone, I am a passerby, fake~~~ Can you call me Xiao Lu? Xiao Ren? (Damn, who told you to kill him), Xiao Jia? Um, let's just call me Passerby, please treat me well~~
I don't want~ Random passerby
Haha, let's see who you'll call Little Red Riding Hood from now on~~~^ω^
Little Red Riding Hood, even if you change your name, you are still you, you can't change that.
Um... when the time comes, you tell me to pretend I didn't hear it, hahahahahaha~~~
Huh? Who is Little Red Riding Hood? Uh, can you introduce me to her?
Wuu... Little Red Riding Hood... you have such a cruel heart~
......Um, changing the name, it's not that harsh, right... ⊙▽⊙
The second piece, when the words reached the tip of the pen, I found I couldn't even manage a simple beginning. This is also how I felt when writing an introduction, as if there were thousands of words that couldn't be fully expressed, leaving me helplessly bent over the desk trying to sort out my thoughts. Overall, regarding this piece, the author is emotional, but constrained by the lack of concrete examples, making the structure appear weak. As for the writing, it is somewhat scattered. The main body of the article revolves around those people you pass by, and emotions are harder to write about compared to experiences. It's clear that it was written quite earnestly, so I offer encouragement!
Load more replies